L2 Writing 5

Wow, I may have just found the key! In exchange for extra time playing World of Warcraft today, J has just agreed to write a dairy entry describing what he did in the game. Once we finished playing, he set himself down with great alacrity and wrote the entry:

Then we went over mistakes:

While I haven't succeeded in getting J to start keeping a dairy of his real life, it may actually work with virtual reality! At least long enough for him to get some writing skillz together ...